The map is quite good. I haven't played it yet, but I think it could be fun on small TDM games. There is some good detailing here and there and it feels consistent, but there are some flaws, too.

First off, there is a clip at the outsite area wrongly placed. It blocks one entrance. You have to raise the whole clip there.

Another weak point is your way of lighting. I only found "/newent light 15 255"-entities. This is not an appropriate lighting, really. You may put one very bright light next to the source (/newent light 5 255) and then light up the areas around with less bright entities (/newent light 15 100). As a hint: Do not try to get rid of all shadows, since this is the only way in AC to get some atmosphere into the map.

I actually prefer straight texturing and therefore I have some issues with your choice of textures. But I only want to point out the "real" mistakes, because a lot of people like colourful maps. One weird thing for instance are the tiles on the ceiling. At the first moment it looks like the map was upside down. Those tiles are floor-textures. Furthermore you used a trimmed stair-texture for walls. That doesn't work out too good and there is a wall texture of that kind actually, which is used on ac_depot.

Some corridors are too narrow and I am missing space for moving in some spots. Scaling up a few areas would smoothen the gameplay of your map.

Well, you said this is a 24 hours non-stop work. I actually never spent so much time in a row on mapping. From my experience I can tell you, that sometimes it's better to go sleeping and have a look at your map the next day.

Keep it up!

I'll work on it today when I get the energy. Maybe I should have slept haha.

The ceiling tiles... they look like they can be used as ceiling tiles to me, but I'll change them, along with the textures on the inside.

Also, the minor crampage... I'll even it out a bit and make some areas bigger.

Thanks for the critique Mr. Floppy!

I can't really decide on this map .. it's definitely built too narrow;
but since it's rather small and hasn't got that many "real" choices in paths to take anyway it kinda looks like a 1on1 map to me ..
.. and then these things suddenly aren't that terrible any more.
There's a lot of good architectural working-with-the-engine going on already, just the scale wasn't nailed (see above) - actually I even find the lighting to have been done with more care than one often sees (re: Mr. Floppy didn't like it) - maybe it could be made less "splotchy" (instead of splotches of light soften the transition (e.g. outside)). But I can't shake the basic feeling of it not being a battleground I would feel comfortable on - weirdest thing.

MeatROme how can I improve the map? Is it just the narrowness? Damn... I always mess up the scale it seems...

Or maybe I should make this a 1 vs 1 map? Or 2 vs 2?

Also, what's not packaged right? I packaged this just like all my other maps and they didn't get that error... Weird.

EDIT: OK, I followed the packaging guide. Hopefully it's packaged right this time.