This map isn't too bad really, despite the crappy packaging. The map has nice flow in most areas, some good jumps and a quite like the theme although it's nothing exciting.
of course there are a few areas that need work on in the map.
The weapons placement and supply is poor and there are a very small amount of weapons for 5-8 players, realistically this map is suited to 1-4.
The quad is too accessible and should be moved to where the two rockets are (don't put two rockets next to each other either..)
If you look at some of the most popular ffa maps you will see there are usually at least two of the weapons except for nades. I would add a few more rifle and mg rounds and move the rocket rounds to better spots.
I also feel some of the jump pads are a little too easy particularly the one on the back wall where the GA is. Just reducing these a small amount could make the map nicer and a little more engaging to play.
There is also one area I find rather annoying, which is the tower between the quad and the rockets. I don't think it shouldn't be there as you need a route between those points, but it is too big and the edges of it make it awkward.
Other than these points I think you've made a good effort on the map and should try and fix these things up so that the map can have good game play in all modes. 3/5