The layout is pretty good. It flows well. I usually comment about the appearance though, because layout isn't really obvious until you go around the map for something like half an hour. The appearance takes seconds to point out.

The first thing: Texturing. It seems like a bunch of textures randomly thrown together in some cases. One example is where you combine a computer texture with the pk01_wall03b_d wall texture. They don't seam that well and you made where they join completely flat (functionally it makes sense since the wall is on angle and pushing in things on an angle is more difficult, clipping is impossible).

The other situation is where the thing suddenly shifts from the philipk texture set to the gibbie one. One's gray, the other brown. It's a sudden enough change that it should be introduced slowly. In many areas they are balanced well but in some (including a ramp.. It's hard to say while on here) and in the lava area, the balance is off. You went entirely for gibbie in the area.

Other than that, good looks. I like those towers sticking out even though you can barely see them and not access them.. But they add the atmosphere to the map that makes it somewhat open, even though it's entirely indoors.

3/5 (3.5)