You set just 2 playerstarts (and in the middle of air), and the map is unplayable in my opinion, but I like the structures. I think you should get rid of all those holes and "traps" to give players the opportunity to move around without falling somewhere.
P.S.: you forgot the 256x256 pixel screenshot.

for this time on here, i agree with meister :P.

u know how 2 make details, but please texture those details again. u took a nice theme for it, but use the right textures then for that theme.
i wouldnt say this map is unplayable, but yes, please remove those traps. lightning isnt bad to :D!

i give 3/5 now, please fix those points, then probably 5/5!

I looked over the map ( I didnt do this earlier, big mistake, and found a few problems. I've fixed the floor up and left one hole in the center, but its not terribly big, I also edited some of the other ones. Fixed a few textures, still workin though.

sorry for posting without looking it over.

You could stand to improve a few things:

1 - remove the Windecker title that you put up.. It seems a little vainglorious and only takes from the theme. If you still want a stamp on the map, put it on the bottom of the map where nobody has to see it unless they go into edit mode or fall off the edge.

2 - remove the jumppad that goes into an invisible teleporter. There are already 2 jumppads adjascent to it that accomplish more or less the same thing.

3 - consider stairs so that you can get to the top without jumppads. Those seem to be the main way of moving around.

4 - make the paths wider where you did put stairs. They're narrow enough that nobody would want to use them, and they're the only real alternative to the jumppads (you have teleports but... still)

I agree, for now this isn't playable. You have to be concerned far too much about the movement in the map so as to not fall down, and the ways of moving are limited. Widen the paths, make a more fluid way of moving (a platform, a staircase, etc.) and this should improve immensely.

I shall take your opinions and put them into work, I like your ideas, ( i wish everybody posted like that ) You can expect an update within 2 to 3 hours, perhaps less.

I'd like to keep the jump-teleports for now, i shall change them up though, but i will widen the paths and stairs. I have a habit of making things really narrow. the other jumppads will be changed though, Ill TRY to do it in a way that permits the best movement possible ( that i can think of )

What would you think about putting some sort of symbol where Windecker is? I think your right about removing the name, but i think the wall is a tad plain without.

By all means you can put a symbol there. Just don't make it too obvious or extravagant, so that the map ends up like a machine-tribal map or something.. Lol

You should playtest the map with somebody before posting, as a general rule. That way you can get past the fact that you made it and just figure out through experience whether the map is playable or not.

Another thing I forgot to mention: The ammo placement is quite basic. I saw a few rockets and health and ALOT of rifle ammo. You need armour, shells, bullets, etc. to even this out. I think you were right not to put a quad in -- the map is too small. But the other stuff needs to be included.

Almost ready to upload. The upper area is a lot more walkable, i added new pathways, widened the stairs, added more stairs, and now everything is quite easily accessed. ( to me anyways )

I like to play test maps, but the problem is, Nobody seems Smart Enough to understand that Im trying to play test though I clearly explain it. All they do is jump up and down like lunatics.

I've changed the ammo placement a fair bit too, trying to keep it spread out and even, and the quad shall stay out too.
And for the symbol, as you will see, I put it on only one wall and its supposed to be an A ( Amynta, which may become Amynya if i decide so. )

Also edited the lights a bit.

I found more fixes :)

-the symbols need to be noclipped

-one of the staircases cannot be climbed

-that teleporter-jumppad combo is really awkward.. just throwing that out there..

-maybe change the symbols to match the theme better.

-more ammo is probably needed.