Nice layout, look forward to the completed map.

Nice map. I don't recall the last time I've seen a map of this genre, although there are a myriad of maps in a theme of a country miles away...

The lighting needs work, because there is none. All the rooms are dark and that takes away from it. This sort of map could benefit from the use of torches, unless you think they're cliche. They may be necessary though.

Also there's little done with textures. Alot of the rooms look like each other. While this may not be a problem, maybe having a random thing in a room may make it stand out. Of course if I were to play this for a while I wouldn't need these things to know where I am, but anyone would have slight trouble navigating.

I like the balls on that top of the temple.
I like the 'torn' sheets.
I like the atmosphere.

Basically if this were lit better it would be a really good map. For now, it's a better-than-average map.

4/5

EDIT: lol at me, I didn't read your description about the lack of light/detail.. Okay I'll let it slide but definitely keep working on this. 4/5 with noticeable lack of light/detail says something.

Apart from not being finished as you stated, there is one part of the map that needs to be redone, the part behind the bridge, gallery. (in the picture above, the part between the 2 large buildings in the back). Beyond that its basically looking al the way down with deathmaterial.

That should be more creative, a pit of Scarlac perhaps (just an idea that popped up in my mind), would be fun for spectators also to see players slide to their death :)

But all in all, this map has potential, a load of it.

1: as many already said: lights and details
2: could be a nice ctf-map
3: clipping sucks :-/ the map is ment to riflejump-around in my oppinion
4: the bases i would change them. ask me in irc, ill help you

4/5, improve it and im sure i can give it 5/5

told you that you can make great maps when its about some concept or something new and different :D
i say keep making concept or something that is different from the maps all the people make :D

Misan, both you and Redon NEVER cease to amaze me. The other night I was on my other computer which runs on Dial Up so I had to wait an 1-3 hours to download... It was worth it! I am a concept mapper myself, I like to create maps more for the beautiful looks and complicated geometry. I really love this map, it shows what every concept mapper has to look for in the near future. The only thing I regret is that last night, while Downloading, I did not know this map was by you o.O Now that I know its by you, it makes it more worth while. I really look forward to seeing more from you, NEVER stop making maps old friend...

Your old friend,
KI113R

i really dislike to make it a ctf map, cause u would get the same problem like frostbyte got D:! please just keep it a capture map and not a mutant ctf map.

what u got against riflejumping viruz :P? its got a good flow on my opinion.

i agree with viruz, some bases could be changed a bit, but this could be a matter of taste.

for this time 80points (would like to give 70points but not possible, much things has to be done on the map yet), but please improve the map!

Rifle jumping is good for skill movement but it shouldn't be the focus of the map. Frostbyte's problem is that it's mostly for rifle jumping, but it has good character outside of that.. If you look for it I guess :P

It seems small for a ctf. Capture might work, but I know little of that mode and its intricacies because I don't play it (think about dying every 2 seconds because one team got the rockets or bullets and just assails the other bases).

What was the problem, do you think, that frostbyte got? Do you mean the thing I said?

FINAL OPINION: Maybe, maybe maybe consider making the hb/quad easier to get (as in, you do not necessarily have to rifle-jump multiple times to access them). That's just an opinion. Obviously using them is a luxury that must be worked for but that's my thought.

Still, again, good map :P

Hey Misan , first im sorry to be offline such a long time ;).
2nd I think, thats your best map, I like this Style in Maps.
I hope we can make a new map together soon? Don't you want?