1st nice map :D, even its a metl4 mod D:!
2nd u should try to use different lights. u added those lighttexture with different colours (like metl4 has) but u havent added a "fitting" light with it D:!
3th u should add the name of map and author, press /mapmsg "map" to do that.
4th this map is actualy very narrow, i think it would be bad because of rockets D:.
5th the jumppad u added could be less strong, maybe 15 0 0 0 0 would already do it.
6th the geometry looks sumtimes, a bit strange, even i think insta 1 on 1 or 2 on 2 wouldnt be bad on it :D!
7th detailing, some texturecombinations r a bit strange, they dont got "dept". would be nice if u would make they give a better 3D feeling (like grid them).
8th anyways, nice map :D!

please improve geometry, detailing and light to get 4/5. If u add mapname and author, improve the small rooms and jumppad, then 5/5! So at this moment, 3/5

Hi ! Thanks for the feedback, i'll try to do something for the next map

It's incredibly small. You had ramps joining in with other ramps and platforms very closely. Try this: select the entire map, then copy it and use g + scroll to increase gridsize once. Then paste the map back and it will be 2x2 bigger. Then you can tinker with the smaller details and the layout may not be so cramped.. Maybe.

In general it needs better texturing. Personally I hate that step of development but it's probably the most important if done properly. It is what separates a boring map from a rich one, and a cluttered map from a balanced one. Right now you've got a cluttered one in terms of texturing (and layout of course). Try to find the texture that you like and stands out, and base all other selection around it. That way the map will have a unifying theme throughout and should in theory have really balanced texture use.

It's better to omit a texture than to feel that you have to use it.

Good job though.

3/5