Good atmosphere. Immediately I entered the map and it looked natural. After 10 seconds it fell apart, however. You tried to push in the wall to fit the brick textures, thereby making it look less flat. But you did this in a pattern and so it looks less natural, like you tried to make it look natural but it's synthetic regardless.

The lava's well done. The particles work.

I can tell the gameplay is all about the teleporters. They all seem to link and connect to important parts so knowing where they go will determine the victor. This is new, as I don't see other maps doing this. It's refreshing.

You need to put noclip on the parts sticking out of the wall. They're small outlinings to something running up the wall. I don't know how to describe it. Running along the wall on the bottom level, you will get stuck on it.

Also, noclip the trim on the floor. It's annoying that you rise up and fall down slightly and suddenly as you run. You've obviously nclipped and clipped everything else, so maybe you left these undone on purpose.. I don't see why though.

Maybe you can consider making a taller platform to rifle jump onto the top level?

Consider putting a health boost over the lava. It's well worth the risk of falling in.

Good though! 4/5, change what I said and 5/5.

1st thx 4 comment :D
2nd ye i should make those brick textures look less patern, even it was much work to make :P.
3th i should noclip a tiny bit more, again :P.
4th i dont know about that 10+, i think the map is a bit to small for it :s, but i could make health is floating above lava, and take the health from the quadroom away.
5th nice u like the teleporters :D!
6th srry, but u actaully can get on 2 different ways on the platform of yellowarmour, jumpshot or using those candles.
7th thx 4 commment again :D!

meatrome, please comment why u gave the map 40points, maybe i can learn something from it.

D: dont think it was bad ment meatrome. i just could learn from the things u dislike about the map. Thats why i asked it D:!

Quin and MeatROme,

maybe i had to say it in the content, but i made this replica, to try to get old classic fragmaps back into sauer, where they belong :D!

is that to say that maps originally added into sauerbraten releases were later removed to make room for others?

or i guess this would be in the cube engine..

just so i'm not spamming: yeah you're right, a healthboost might not be necessary here. but do put health over the lava.

on a side note, I would also like to know what the skulls/3 stars are all about. Obviously 3 stars is positive as Quin and Meatrome have it, but this doesn't necessarily mean that skulls are bad.. They look kinda sick to be honest. Is this the introduction into a grading system through pictures? If so, I wanna be a scorpion :]

hehe kretren xD, u can add a screenshot to ur account, by changing the account settings.