5/5 i love it

maybe a bit less health or ammo near the yellowarmour, but thats it.

edit: after a while of jumping around: maybe a bit less cliping

...from the screenshot, it looks like another square-shaped map with some crates in the center, but when i saw the stuff that isn't on the screenshot, i was a bit positively surprised ;)

The broken parts look great !

And yes, i also think that parts of a map which you could reach easily shouldn't be clipped (roofs). Also, i'm not sure about the pickups...in one room, there are 2 cartridges next to each other, which seems kinda useless.

There are a bit many shotgun shells and riflerounds too, imo. Still better than having too many grenades though ;)

The surrounding of the map is very nice, it's just cool if you have sth to look at, other than if it's just a closed room with solid walls.

4/5, good job ! :D

i realy like the texturing and lighting of the map :D!

the gameplay could be better, by clipping a bit less of the roofs, and delete those cartridges (no one really got much on it, you already get 40 shooting times with the pistol when you respawn) and take 1 of the 2 shotgun ammo in the middle away, so it looks like that you got a bit less ammo. Really would like to see that the 3 health next to each other, could be a bit more spread out (like for replacing that 1 shotgun ammo in middle, for 1 health).

details are really done well to :D.

anyways great map :D 4/5, would like to give 5/5 for it, if do something about the clipping and ammo :D.