This one's a realy nice map with an interesting theme. There could be more Detail and better textures in this map, but it's ok this way.
I'll give you 4/5.

Finally a reply :P and ill be getting some non defult textures soon :P

Appreciate the effort you have put into making this map Chinchy. Interesting idea and away from the many predictable maps that are coming through. As the above comment,a few more textures wouldn't go amiss but overall a very good map. 4/5

Not a bad "little" map you have going on here. =P The geometry could have been better, but this probably took you a little while, so i can understand. I loved the tank, truck, and fort in the kid's room, although the tank seemed little more than just a hide and seek place even with the turret, it would serve little use in a game. I liked the pool table idea, but it seemed incomplete as you could only hide in one hole, and other players would most likely spot your feet sticking out of the table. It probably wouldnt hurt to select the table, and enlarge it by a gridsize or 2, or just completely remake it but larger. A really good effort. 4/5

P.S. I noticed that you have your map listed as copyrighted. Most people misunderstand how copyrighting works. Just because you say it is copyrighted does NOT necessarily mean that it's copyrighted. In order to have your work copyrighted, you must purchase one, and notify the u.s. copyright office, so that way you can protect your work in the court of law, if your work does happen to be infringed on. Well thats if you live in the United States though, but i'm pretty sure that in other countries the process is similar. An alternative would be to get a Creative Commons license. Its totally free, and is backable in court of law.

Thanks aron ill look into that now and ill make the pooltable bigger and if I can find a way the tank more interactive but i havent found a way to do so if only this game supported multiplayer scripting I could make the turret move and shoot -_-. Any chance that will be coming out soon?

The texturing is fairly good, but the map goes a bit BOORING after 1 watch..

What about creating a basement/attic?
Some secret tunnels and a chimney+fireplace would be cool, too.
Another thing to create would be a bigger garden with some mouseholes.
And very important: detail, detail, detail and texturing :).

P.S.:this map got the potential to introduce a new genre in sauerbraten maps!

im trying to get everything built so my main consern is expanding the house not uber amounts of detail maby i should have set this map as under construction :P but ya I'll pollish it up once i've roughed everything out but atm I have mid exams so I cant do much for a week or 2 but after that I have a week off school I can dedicate to creating that basement and the rat holes would be cool. I know 1 for each downstairs room they all lead to the garden :P

P.S If you find a good texture pack that i could use give mem the link I could pollish all the textures over with it and make the map with more eye candy I hate the kitchen colour :P

Oh and byte dont be shy if you see me editing my map you can help if you want its a big task to do by myself. I need all the help I can get :P

do you know how long it took me to build that map? 5 days of none stop mapping (I passed out on day 5 -_-)

Edited by Quin: No flaming, if someone votes your map a certain way it is their own choice. Deal with it, you should be posting to Quadropolis for objective opinions, not just praise.

Id really like to help you with this map, but i'm no good mapper at all :(

Maybe you got inspired from world of padman's levels.Good idea!

5/5

I'm gonna start working on my map again.