I like this map. It's basic but still detailed enough to keep attention. It also incorporates glass, which is relatively rare in maps of this genre. I found that grenade "secret spot" with the ammo, etc. by accident. It's nice but I'd like another secret passage in which you can access it through rifle-jumping. That way instagib would be more rewarding.

Also, you have alot of random stuff outside of where people can go or even see, which I guess doesn't inflict on the map too much but I don't know... It looks sloppy :P

Good job on the map though. 5/5 because you can't really do much more with it, and I'd enjoy playing on this.

This map is ok, but right off the bat there's a lot of problems. First of all you've mixed like 5 texture sets/themes. Second of all there are a lot of bad texturing in some spots like you've got those blue splotches in some places. Ceilings are too low, ceilings need to usually be at least 6 blocks off the ground (Using the default grid size). I would use the Gibbie texture set (Those orange pad textures on page 8) for this map, it reminds me of quake. Hallways may need to be a bit wider in some places.

Well the first part I noticed was in the area shown in the top right screen shot. I also saw some more spots around. I would just go over the entire map and remake some parts.

"This map has a poor layout or one that could be improved."

Wtf? I think you guys are taking this way too far.... All I see is yellow warnings etc etc etc ... does it really have to be?

I am working on improving the layout and texturing at the moment, I will upload a new version at some point. Its a little difficult to know exactly what to change since "This map has a poor layout or one that could be improved" doesn't really tell me what is wrong with it. Given that good layout is broadly down to personal preference it seems a bit harsh to flag it as a major problem.

I'd much rather be working on a new map than trying to fix up this one which I thought was finished so it can become 'starred content' :(