The different boxes kinda ruin it for me, otherwise the layout is okay, if not a little dreary from too much "sameness" all over the level. Maybe make the lighting or texturing somewhat less uniform? Not actually too sure myself.

The technical side of the map looks pretty good. It's well let, texturing doesn't make me want to vomit and the layout flows nicely, but as Quin said it's a little generic. Every map should have some sort of selling point which makes the player say "Ooh! This is the map with the..."
Try to give the map a personality or a theme which will distinguish it from other maps. Whether it be a new and interesting layout with lots of hidden goodies or a map which just looks pretty damn cool. Even a pretty focal point can make a map more interesting.
I like to use a map to help me gain an advantage over my opponents on the rare occasions that I get involved in a fight. Jump pads, dark alcoves, high levels and hidden sniper towers are all important in making a map interactive instead of simply a backdrop for mindlessly running about blowing each others brains out.
Strategically placed crates are always useful when they're set with care, but leaving them strewn about can be more of an irritation than a vantage point.
It's a good map, and technically I can't find much wrong with it, but there's not a great deal that sets this map apart from others.
Still, keep going. It's got potential. :)

I haven't downloaded this yet, but the theme is a factory/warehouse just by the name and screenshot. It would be a crappy factory/warehouse without boxes strewn about.

Consider a forklift in there? Then this would be "Ooh the map with the forklift!" Lol :P

I actually love this map. it needs some work though, and I'll tell you what needs improvement before I tell you what I like:

-the lighting is bad. where you used saturated green it is really fierce and makes what I call a "lime" effect.. Where the color is really extreme and looks unnatural. tone it down a bit and that will fix it.

-the boxes are cool, and in some cases they allow for fast access to higher levels by jumping off them. however, you should change the texture of the metal ones to match the wood ones. they do not fit in at all. also, remove a few in the narrower areas because they do mess up movement. finally, the big ones look retarded.. lol instead, make stacks of the small ones.

-i think the clip on top of the towers is a bad idea, i'm not sure if I'm the only one but w/e. I think it would add to the gameplay to be able to rifle-jump onto the top and run around. the outskirts of the map should remain clipped though.

Now, for what I love:

-the layout is really good. It's fast to get around and yet someone can't really just camp in one spot and see the other guy across the map because there's so much in the way of view.

-there are multiple levels but they can be easily accessed through riflejumping without looking for ramps, etc.

-the texture (really there's just one lol) fits, and I like it. you could do more with it though.

I'm actually going to play on this with my friend. It's that good. And I hope you improve it. If not, I'll do it to the standards I mentioned and just play it with my friend :P

4 stars. do what I suggested and easily a 5 star.

hmm interesting map, i like the theme :D!
first, gameplay would be nice, exept u going wild with clipping, while some places r clipped, that doesnt needs to be clipped, u still can get over the clip :P!
lightning, actualy irritating that green light, its pretty distracting, for gameplay.
gameplay, see lightning :P.

theres actualy nothing more to say about the map, nice map keep goin glike that! 4/5