Hmmm, I like the pool idea =D But to me it's just too dark. Make it just a little brighter and I'll give you a 5/5

4/5 for now

Well good map... the guy is right it is to dark brighten it up also with the pool plez dont put the jumppad on the diving board its anoying.

The boxes and the tombstones (at least i think there tombstones) need not have the ground on the top of them. put a different texture on them. also in the cave thingy the halls are too narrow... i like to be able to take a step to the right and left and be able to jump even in a confined space.

You may want to add some fog to the map too to add a nice affect, and also maybe some waterfog too. if you were to fog i would suggest a lightish blue and for the water a darker blue.

o also it is too easy to get to the top of your level so maybe not let them get there or make it harder some how... i dont no.

Also in the zip file you need to make a packages and a base folder and put the following in them... the ogz file (your map) the jpg file (the pic of your map) and your cfg file (configeration of your map)

so over all a nice map kind of mysterious garden in the middle of winter some were. I give you a 4/5

Chasester :)