Is it fine now?

I already know its going to be no more 3/5, this map is improperly packaged and that made me consider to bother even installing. After finnaly loading the map, I immediatly noticed several flaws: 1. the map may be pretty, but unfortunatly gameplay sucks, The one olny place people will fight is the middle plaza, all the other corriders arent very good for gameplay, also theres not alot of room in the map. This being said I move to step 2.

2. At first I thought the mapmodel at the top of the oil tower was just for show. Olny when I flew up in the air and dropped down on it, did I realize it was a teleport. Not many people will notice this, also its as hard to see the jumppad, until I went into edit mode I didnt see it.

hope this helps, bigm0nkey

2/5

I didn't package it right? I thought i did it like you said.

Bigm0nkey: yeah i noticed the gameplay sucks. What do you suggest i do?

Oh and, how do i make the screenshot less blocky?

I uploaded another version that makes the map have much more room.

Tell me what you think :)

packaging is finnaly right! congratulations :D. But it doesnt look like you changed much, yes you added armour and yes you made the teleport look like a teleport. Im sorry but still 2/5

lol.

Ok, i have been thinking, and wouldn't it be better if i just learned from my mistakes and started a different map?