I would download it, it looks like a cool map, but i can unrar things. Can you zip it?
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I am a little confused. Who actually made this map; you, King, or Sniper? I'm assuming this is snipers map for the moment.

Don't take this too harshly, it's just my opinion.

ac_desert4_beta looks like desert a lesser version of desert. It reminds me so much of the original; the well, the sand garden areas, the inside spaces, the floor.. be that as it may, it is an exceptional (first?) map. The detailing is fine, but some of the textures clash horribly, and what is that pole area doing there somewhere south? Delete that, what the? The layout is on, but i seem to be going around in circles; it's like a maze.

Keep it up and work at it.

lol king=sniper its my new nickname xD
and i didn't have remaked a lesser version of desert, it's my map, I just took ideas from ac_desert1

i have make .zip ;)

This map looks way better than your ac_depot2.

Again you display that you know how to handle the ac-editor. I recovered a lot of details like broken walls and so on, and on the other hand there are still plane walls. This looks a bit like you got bored or probably forgot it... However, I don´t understand how this could happen accidently...

I agree with R4zor, it looks pretty much like a rip-off. Lack of creativity? ...depot2, desert4?!
Of course it´s legal to get inspired by existing maps, but it would be more interesting if your maps were 'unique'. I suggest you spend some more time on finding a theme, then draw some sketches before you start. And I guess you will come across a non-default-name for your maps if you spent more time on each map.

As I said you know how do map in general, but here´s a little screenshot which displays three places where something went wrong.

http://www.misterfloppy.de.vu/misc/screeny_king_01.jpg

I guess it´s the place R4zor complained about on the second picture. That´s indeed strange... Got bored?

On the other two pics are 'illogical' things. Try to find them by your own and you will know what I mean. One hint: skymap...

Hmmm, I complained a lot again, but I seriously think you could create great maps if you would take more time working out all details and aspects of a map. :)

Keep it up!

Ok, i just played this and it really just looks like a remake of ac_desert1. The layout is the same, you even had the well and the sand gardens. This looks waaay too much like ac_desert. (I found a heightmap glitch on the ceiling of the arch wit the garage door.) Maybe if you change it a little and add some new paths, etc. it wouldn't looks so much like ac_desert1. I won't rate as of now because its a beta version and needs to be improved.

ok I am going to regulate this

map updated :)

Hey, hey... slow down! You seriously need to become more patient.

Obviously you fixed this one flaw at the fontain and just put another wired thing there. Two hooks are kind of over the top and the hook doesn´t really fit into this environment anyway.

The place R4zor complained about still looks ramdom and the illogical window is also still there. See, you can watch through a window on the one side of the walll, while there´s a room on the other side with no window at all... (picture 3)

And where the hell did you get this terrible texture? Did you make it yourself? If so, you should have a look at another tutorial, because there is a BIG mistake: IT´S NOT TILE-ABLE! Don´t use it.

I´m not sure if it was worth writting this lines, due to the fact that you released it as final.
However, if you will keep working too fast and 'inconsequent', you´ll surly get the same comments with every new map. I tried to encourage you to spend more time on each 'project' - to put more effort into it - but in the end it´s up to you... Good luck!

terrible texture ? o_O
ITS MY TEXTURE !!
lol

Listen to what we are telling you sniper/king, we do have some experience in map making and we are not telling you all this to piss you off.
We feel that you have potential and want to help correcting mistakes.
Next time we'll meet online i'll show you what's wrong (too much to tell here)
BTW, What's the point of that texture? it's not even used in the map!

You´ll find the texture at that one random place. (picture 2 on my screenshot)

There are two mistakes:

1. It´s not 'tile-able'. That´s probably the most important attribute of a texture. Except textures which are not supposed to be 'tiled', like doors, windows and so on... Have a look at the screenshot below:

http://www.misterfloppy.de.vu/misc/screeny_king_02.jpg

2. It´s too big. 400 x 400 pixels. A texture like this shouldn´t be bigger than 256 x 256 pixels in general. It´s also a question of memory-space-waste...

And to be honest, this dune-like pattern doesn´t really fit. Think about sniper used it in this map and imagine how it would look like in reality. I´ve never been in a desert-town, but as I know you woun´t find a place on earth where the sand looks lik this somewhere next to a wall. I guess you will only find these patterns across the open land... Maybe I´m wrong, educate me! :)

However, thanks cleaner for pointing out that none of us want´s to piss off someone! I surly woun´t make screenshots and all those comments if I wasn´t feeling someone had potential.