This is my first official map, i hope everyone likes it, i am improving on it, such as ambient lighting and evening the detail out, but this map will be completed very shortly.

Hope you like it,
Assassin-w00t

I kinda like the layout and the feeling of the map, though it could be improved: There are way too much heavy particles. Be careful with those, especially with a lot amount of the same kind of particle. Try to decrease the number of those particles, and/or - even mire essencial - change them to something smaller. It looks very odd when a small torch can emit such a big fire :)

Also, you should use ambient lights (very soft, with high radius) to enlight some dark areas a bit.

while on the mostpart i say this is a 10/10 i agree with hero on the lighting. ill help you out if u need with the ambient lights. on the other hand i saw someplaces were GREATLy detailed and others were reaally blocky and pixely. make it a little more evenly detailed. your rope bridge kickes @55 too. i give it a 4.

way too many torches xD

I also find that the lighting is weird: it needs ambient light, and the contrast between the torch and the blue fire is too strong IMO. There is also some kind of contrast with small detail and flat and blocky area...
The hidden portal sould be closer to the wall (like in relic, for instance) in order too avoid anyone to hide IN the wall.

In my precedent post I didn't ask you why there was a SP signature inside a wall, and now I meet some guys that are working on the same map in coop edit who said that you stole the map. Weird, isn't it?

Umm.
Skiing Penguins puts his signature on like every coop map there is XD.
I found his signature on FAWOD and FSOD :P
Lol he stuck it waaaaaaay out there in a corner on FSOD with skybox texture XD.
And he thought I wouldn't see it ;)

dude, this map is awesome. nuff said.

Hey mate, I just cruized through your map and I really like it. A couple of points though:

1. Your particles are a bit too much. I found using the same settings, but using particles 9 instead of 8 made them look a lot better, more firelike.

2. This may be a personal matter, but I would like to see you use texscale 0.5 on the textures for the floor and walls. Since a player is always roaming through tunnels and close to walls it would be nice to have a bit higher resolution on the texture.

3. Whats up with that portal inside the wall???

Otherwise a great map, good layout and looks like a fun play 4/5