I got the leetz0r link! my map must be stamped with the seal of approval!
Joshuah Kuttenkuler
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H'okay, review times now. Your map has definite potential- I like most of what I see. But it could use a lot of polishing. I'm inclined to say your map has a bit too much height, it feels like you have to run up way too many stairs to get up to the next level. Unless I'm completely wrong, most people are going to end up in the tunnels and stay down there, because getting out will leave them too exposed for too long.

Speaking of the tunnels, they're pretty bare. You need to try and make your level of detail more even: some areas have a lot of detail, while others are basically Legos. I'd add lots of extra geometry to the tunnels and try and fit in several more textures as well.

Your lighting could use some help too. You're a bit lack in sources (couple of torches, teleports, and the sun), so it'll take some prep work to set up, but this map could look much cooler with some dramatic lighting.

Speaking of teleports, one of your teledests points the wrong way.

Finally, think about adding a cfg that sets a different skybox and a thumbnail for your map. Be sure to package them right (files go in the /packages/base folder), and good luck!

um , crap. fixing...

The lighting in the map is too uniform, one of the biggest things that adds depth to a map is the shadows. Consider toning down the global illumination for more local and direction light sources.

you didnt check the map after finishing it, please do that before you upload the map. because you didnt even see that the bases are floating if the entitys arent in the ground >.>

This is a 5+ player map.
The bases are so placed so that NO location can be correctly defended. This ensures that either a team works together or it looses the game. This map ENFORCES the idea of cooperation to win.
Without working together, this map is lost.
You have to capture multiple bases and consider strategy, ensuring that your bases can be defended by each other. That is the MOST important element this map has to offer.

If your going to complain about looks alone,
this isn't the map for you. If it ever got
in the official list of maps,
I am certain it's playability
would be the most important thing considered.

PROPOSAL:
Quin and others, here is a proposal for you.
I and my *team* of "noobs" will finish the geometry and add some depth to the tunnel structure, and correct for some ent placements.
I request that then another officially sanctioned team of U.N. Sauerbraten Investigators go in and properly light the map, and perhaps work on ensuring shaders give the appropriate effect.

oh man! this node has got a fancy URL (1337)