Good detail and good layout.

Looks like you followed the mappers guidebook ! :P

The crouch health in the water, it's for .94?

The CLA Spawnpoints on the boxes are an interesting addition.
I also like the RVSF base's tiny control panel near the low exit.
Funny detail, but cool.

Can't wait for the final.
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Great Job man :)

but fix the zip file: http://www.quadropolis.us/node/226

Wow attention to detail, you show how those details make all the difference. How much time do you spend on a map? I really like the different light colours, they add to the ambience and help to identify where you are; I have been on many maps where I am just confused bacause every room looks the same.

It suits AC requirements very well! I shall take note of this map and try to take some pointers from it!

Well done!

I reckon this map is better than some official maps. One thing. Although it is very pleasing visually, it is not in gameplay because.. no healthpacks on the path using the bridge. I noticed that unless you go down to the water, there aren't much hope of surviving (theres one near RVSF).

Add 1~2 more healthpacks, pistol clips on the straight path to CLA-RVSF flag. It will really help.
This is not a criticism to the map, but my fps is 6~8 because of water xD

Thanks for the storyline.. makes it easier to see the context and what the map should be like.

Well, it would help if you added some more pickups, i couldnt find nades, or much ammo around. Didn't find any armour either.

Nice layout, i must admit, it looks like it would be fun in-game.
Detailing is amazing, i couldnt think of much more to add to that.
Water doesnt lag for me, in a good-weird way.

5/5, well done sir.

@thesourpatchkid:
Yes, the crouch health is designed for 0.94.

@jiba:
Summing all up, the map took me about 25 - 30 hours. Started working on it, at least a month ago. But I think that I´m a slow mapper...

@sharper & undead:
There aren´t so much pickups, because I never played the map with others, yet. I need to get a feeling for the map first. Probably, there will be more on the alpha version.

Current pickups:

0 x akimbo
0 x kevlar
3 x grenades
3 x health
4 x ammo boxes
...some pistol clips

Yes, there should be some more. ;)

Yes, very detailed map!
Its create a good atmosphere.
My favorit detail is the destroyed stair half in the water.
realy good.

but one kevler west, near the rsvf station would be nice, because its very open, an too easy to kill flag catchers. (in contrast to cla station)

i try it in multyplayer with ~15 peoples
its ok,
all in all
good job.

Great map, Floppy!

As some people said some pick-ups in some strategic areas would be cool.
But I like the level of detail its a really good map. Some of the ceilings are a little low and I hit my head on them ;)

Good job!

"There aren´t so much pickups, because I never played the map with others, yet. I need to get a feeling for the map first. Probably, there will be more on the alpha version."

I have played it 5 times or more, with 15-20 players, and for me it's 8/10

but if you add 2 armours, and 2-3 more healths (because map is large, and I need it for a better ownage:), it will be 10/10

anyway good job!

Thanks again for your comments!!!

I still did not play the map online... However, you all could help me by suggesting where to place which pickup. Especally those who played it multiple times.

BTW:
There´s a little bug on the config. The command 'water -18' is wrong. Needs to be 'waterlevel -18'. That´s why there is a error message when you start the map, 'command water unknown'. I will fix that within the next update.

But I think that it still needs some improvement, my biggest complaint being lack of pickups.

Running through this map, I didn't find many pickups. How does one survive?

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Very good map Mr.Floppy 5/5

The crouch tunnel where the health pack is, I suggest to make it a little bit longer, give us a reason not to go in (getting shoot in the ass) but at the same time needed to get 100% health back.

So, longer and more health packs in there enough to restore heath to full, but just one way to get in and out.