your text file has some mistakes
The map was remaked by Deathstar:
RI: help to fix lag.
these should be changed to
The map was remade by Deathstar:
RI: helped to fix lag.
Now, the map
Can you please fix the ripped in half boxes? It's just... strange. Either erase the half part, or add the missing part. The map is much darker; is that a good thing? To me, it looks like campers will have more advantage now. And what happens when I look at the sky? Nothing, but the skymap is strange looking because it hasnt been properly fitted or something. There is a dark sky, and above the dark sky is a bright sky, which is awkward.
The fixed bridges do look nice, but now they are in the way of your movement... and there is one part near the CLA flag that you can press 'F' to fix the strange block that is next to the bridges.
Good try though, and to be honest, it does look better than Shadow's version. Just take some of my suggestions and try to improve the tiny mistakes.