It has some nice elements, and some nice detailing. Overall good feeling to it, just some of the texture choices are weird, mainly the large use of that rust-stained metal. If you look at the texture, such stains can only occur if the metal lies on the floor - plus I haven´t seen metal coated walls really
Same goes for the wood. I doubt it´ll be used in a factory.

You forgot to include toca´s license file.
Also, you might want to remove all the "thumbs.db" files,s, they are windows junk and only make you zip larger.

I like this map.
Btw, I`m in image :)

That's a fun spot! Almost an easter egg, as far as finding it and hiding down there.

Good work, especially the crane with the pallet.

The skymap is a welcome change too!

Are the smaller areas going to be .94 crouch accessible?

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my question,
is the skymap an open source?
can i use it in some of my maps?
have you made this one, or have you download anywhere?

Its looks fun to play on but some of the textures are kinda wierd. It looks like a atom bomb went off or were in the middle of the apacolypse (O.o?)

Although it has some flaws looks arnt everything. Some of the stuff is totally out of the way, moar than it really should be (the a rmour on that hook for example). Overall its a ok map (i like the apocalypse look). I would normally give it a 4.3 but thats not possible so ill give you a 4. Keep up the good work i guess....

... so see if you can build on that :P

makkE, its kinda hard to find a decent metallic texture, most are brick textures. Also i noticed that the map is currently rated 3.4, if it is average im sure someone has something dramatic they would change on the map.

I like the ambience, there are good details, i like skybox.
But i think use some mapmodels from the CVS (like the stray one) to do it more realistic.
I don't like some room, you did some rooms with 1 or 2 box, maybe add more things :)
I saw a problem with the 2 grey bridges mapmodels over teh 2bench, modify that.

Good work! :D

I updated it, basically got rid of the rustic texture in a lot of areas, i love the grey brick texture :P, fixed the packaging.

Also deathstar, in the next update im probably gunna go crazy with more detail, so look for it :P.
Put in a vote if you wish guys :)

Yes, the crane is awesome, so is teh rest of teh map... I had a peek of it when Undead showed me, it was awesome back then, and its still awesome

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good map err yer thats it XD

Well, (big smile):)

Excellent work so far. It is very well constructed and I like the new textures and details. Some of the hierarchy like it and say it has potential, so get all the advice you can get and make improvements as needed.

Best wishes for its success, let the fragging begin on harzrd!!

jiba

Nice map so far!

I recovered some cool, new ideas. E.g., I like the cellar-room, which you can look into from two spots, but not enter and how you used the fences around the 'elektro-meters'...

For my taste, there are to much different textures. But, that´s not a problem at all... and I think nobody really complained about that. (You might know, that I tend to not using enought of them... ;) Just have a look at ac_nest.)

Didn´t play it yet, but it looks like it would be fun. Hope I will find it on the servers next time!