Very nice first map! The lighting is excellent, and the lower room is very unique! The geometry is kinda blocky, brushing it would improve the map very much! 4 out of 5, very nice!

Very good for your first map!
The lighting is excellent, like sauerfreak said, although I think there are bit too many lights, especially in the lower room. But it's not like it makes it worse, it's still nice. I would add more lights in the upper room.
3/5
If you fix all those sharp triangles I'll rate it 4/5
Nice job!

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Yes, I did play it in dmsp.
I think the some of the lights look pretty good, for instance the ones on the very out edge on the metal, but the others are too concentrated. A really bright spot and then the rest of the area was really dark. Not very appealing. The exception here is the colored item spawn lights you used, which I think was cool. Also, it took me a long time to figure out that a teleport lead to the 'lava' rooms. The whole thing didn't seem to fit. The lava on the walls was a great idea though, and would seem to be a good idea for an entirely separate level.

3/5, but closer to 2.5 honestly.

very nice. A bit strange how you mixed in with Gibbie, would have looked better with lunaran texture set but nice detail and lighting. 4/5

Thanx for commenting!