you did a great job making this map .texures,lighting,weapon placing,keep up the great work!!!!!!
alex256-w00t

Nice map. I like the texturing, but some of the ramps could use better texture transitions (I'm guilty of this too), especially where it goes from blue bumpy to red bumpy stuff. Also, your "golden triangle" is really small (yellowarmour, healthboost, quaddamage), and doesn't cover much of the map.

I don't really understand why the greenarmour and yellowarmour are so close to each other, either. It makes it much too easy to gather up both armors, the healthboost, and the quaddamage before anyone can get to you. Each is placed nicely by itself, but the three are too close together.

One thing that bugged me about this map is all the water. We're on a desert planet, and there's water just sitting around being wasted? It looks good, but doesn't make much sense.

Overall, nice work. Good detailing, texturing, lighting. 3/5. Change the golden triangle problem and that'll bump up to at least a 4. :)

Oh, and you've got some packaging quirks to work out. Check out node 226 to see what you should change. :)

OMG THATS SUCH A ROOKIE MISTAKE. Damn it when i set the green armour there i completely forgot that there was yellow armour and HB there I was only thinking "2 green armour in a map this big". As for the changed texturing this was just requested to keep at the beggining of the map by Hirato and Bryan, I personally wanted to change it. I'll change that right away. As for the water well I never said the planet was a wasteland, theres oasisis too and think of it as the drinking source, the places with water have futuristic devices in the drains that cleanse them so you can drink and stuff...as for the big pools you notice how theres pillars and one of the pillars has pipes in it? It makes sense to me... think futuristicly. As for the packaging well I always do ZIP>packages>base>stuff but then for me I hate having to go into there and take the stuff out and then delete the folder and empty the trash. I'm lazy, as you can tell. Thanks for telling me I'll fix right away.

It looks awesome. Very polished. I bet gameplay is fun, too...
Good job. :)

Why do u replaced skeleton with yellowarmour?
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As a whole - great map

A couple of technical things I'd like fixed, I'll rattle those off real quick:
- If the player can't see faces, it's best if they don't exist. For all intents and purposes, this is an indoor map with a few bits of skybox, so it'd be a bit better if you filled the area around the body of the map and used the skybox texture to create the illusion of an outside. (See maps like deathtek or metl3 for examples of how to do this)
- The areas under the sky and next to windows could stand to be a bit sunnier, given the skybox. IE, make them a bit brighter than the bulk of the map, with a bit of a yellow tint.
- The rest of the map is glaringly well-lit, to the point of being overlit. You could drop all those 255 255 255 lights down to 192 192 192 without affecting visibility, and it'd help get that damaging glare off the textures, particularly the ramps.
- The lighting could also be improved by reducing the sheer number of light ents. For a great number of the light panels you have two ents, one at top and bottom: while I can understand why you would do that, it isn't really all that practical.
- be aware of caps... you had the cfg name capitalized

But those are all suggestions: now for some good points. Your walls are internally consistent with each other, while the texturing is complex enough to be a treat to look at and figure out. Similarly, the places where you roughed up the geometry is great, it really helps the map look more interesting.
The sandy bit are a plus, they definately help make the ground more interesting: I'm glad you didn't cop out and make them smooth.
The layout is complex enough to keep gameplay fresh for a long time. I'm defiately hoping to see the a lot in the future.